Friday, April 11, 2014

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Rating: 4.7

Who would think a rose so sweet
Would dry and crumble at my feet
And blooms that scent my night and day
Would steal my heart, then fade away
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Leria Hawkins
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Rob Lamberton 11 March 2024

The thorn has pricked me but I was too far from the flower!

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PREMKUMAR C N 07 December 2022

Beautiful rhyme and beautiful images.

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Captain Cur 31 December 2020

A beautifully composed piece, words that both describe the thorns and petals of love.

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Lyn Paul 12 April 2014

Beautiful words Leria, I must purchase a garden of roses to keep me 39 forever. Thank you

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 April 2014

This is beautiful poetry with a smooth flow and nice rhyme.Loved it.

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Leria Hawkins

Leria Hawkins

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