Runaway kids,
Late-night meals,
Speeding through the red lights, kid
£0.69 lipstick on your cheek
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This is absolutely great, a poem that caught me, it causes such an amazing feeling. It belongs to the best ones I ever read.
sad and lilting like a wafting sad flute....liked the flow of ideas.... like a deep cut oozes.... ***
Intersting style, your poems all sound more like songs. Loved your mythical references. Great job, I like the flow of the poem.