Skies Are Changing Comments

Loved your poem in its entireity, but the last stanza the most, because it rang a bell! 'Skies are changing And rearranging Healing of the secret of her past anorexia She lives through her emotions that scream With joy, as now the days and nights play together In her belief of living the eternal dream.' - Beautiful!

Quotable line... Skies are changing And rearranging Healing of the secret of her past anorexia She lives through her emotions that scream With joy, as now the days and nights play together In her belief of living the eternal dream... Beautiful poem

i did not find anything amusing in the early (nor later) lines, as one commenter seemed to feel. and the poem seems to mix reality with symbolism; symbolism is not my bag and i don't 'do well' interpreting it at times. if the topic were not given (teenage) and anorexia weren't mentioned, i'd have little idea of the poem's meaning. but with those 'clues' i guess it is ok. :))))))) let me read another. bri (

to live her gentle soul always ready to forgive. forgiveness is a great virtue that she has and so she is advancing through the right way finally to live a normal life mending all emotional cases, ...... great done, thanks for sharing

I really really really love it.......10+++++++.+++++++++ To my favorite! ! Naila

The title of the poem helps to understand the poem. Teen age is the age of changes. Boys and girls are physically and mentally changed. Parents should keep an eye on the teen aged boys/girls and frankly and boldly should guide them to face the changes. A thoughtful poem by Hazel Durham.

a moment to dance, Maybe a time for romance? Bluer skies, virgin cloud Her young mind shouting so loud Bursting open into a flow of passion her heart. beautiful expressions of love and care..... very creative presentation my dear poetess. tony

The lithe cadence of these verses and the images, perfectly coincide with its theme: youth, hope, jocundity, and all the aspects of probably the best period of one's life! A lovely poem!

The beginning lines are so amusing. Beautifully penned on nature and teenage. Lofty theme. Let some lines be cited....a moment to dance, Maybe a time for romance? Bluer skies, virgin cloud Her young mind shouting so loud Bursting open into a flow of passion her heart spilling of love, Nature's magic force enticing her to look above Brilliant one.10