Skies Comments

Great verse, phrasing of each line is flawless, your images are very vivid, beautiful composition.10+

The birds I watched were like my hopes, always racing ahead of me, Going into regions I could not see Abandoning my body to gravity, while I watched with my aspiring eyes, my sad eyes, my left-behind eyes. But you kept your hopes with you and took flight into many skies: - - - - - This is a perfect dream flight.A dream you hold close to heart.The dreams that fly and cross many boundaries through creative expressions.A marvelous poem, thanks for sharing.

Best. Poem. Ever. This is what I want to write- dream of writing- but you do it so apparently effortlessly. These verses flow along like the clouds softly riding the currents of air, these lines wing along with the birds and they give wings to your solitary musings there by the ocean. The birds I watched were like my hopes, always racing ahead of me, Going into regions I could not see Abandoning my body to gravity, while I watched with my aspiring eyes, my sad eyes, my left-behind eyes.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -These lines teach us how to integrate thought and poetry so seamlessly, so naturally, so powerfully. This is another of your poems that should be set before the membership as Poem of the Day. Because in all ways possible, it shines and glows and glimmers with light and life. On my Fav List and 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++