Thursday, January 15, 2009

Sketches Comments

Rating: 4.8

Will you think of me?
Do you remember me?
I sit in secrecy, wishing you’d speak to me
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Bilal Raja
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What a sweet poem this is. It is funny how we can pretend not to really like someone as we are giving away our secret and do not want to be exposed. There are simple ways you can start with like a beautiful smile or say something funny. I really like this poem and think you have written it honestly and well. Karin Anderson

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Lum Nothing 21 January 2009

This is quite beautiful. I like the rythme scheme, and the details you give.

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Linda Hepner 21 January 2009

I like the simplicity of this poem. Very direct, can hear your voice.

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linzi- kidd 18 January 2009

spectacular! ilovethis! keep me informed when u write more.thx.!

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Megan R 18 January 2009

You poems are very deep and so cool to read. I hope you write more!

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Sonya Florentino 17 January 2009

Bilal, I like these the best of your poems, as well as Insomnia. Keep writing.

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Ana Zaldivar 17 January 2009

beautiful poem... your words have a lot of feelings! 10 for this one!

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Assorted Thoughts 17 January 2009

I feel you on this one.

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

Losing the one you love is always hard. I agree 100? good job on catching that

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Bilal Raja

Bilal Raja

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