Will you think of me?
Do you remember me?
I sit in secrecy, wishing you’d speak to me
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This is quite beautiful. I like the rythme scheme, and the details you give.
I like the simplicity of this poem. Very direct, can hear your voice.
spectacular! ilovethis! keep me informed when u write more.thx.!
You poems are very deep and so cool to read. I hope you write more!
Bilal, I like these the best of your poems, as well as Insomnia. Keep writing.
beautiful poem... your words have a lot of feelings! 10 for this one!
Losing the one you love is always hard. I agree 100? good job on catching that
What a sweet poem this is. It is funny how we can pretend not to really like someone as we are giving away our secret and do not want to be exposed. There are simple ways you can start with like a beautiful smile or say something funny. I really like this poem and think you have written it honestly and well. Karin Anderson