Thursday, October 1, 2009

Sketch 5 Comments

Rating: ★3.8

in the midmost shrine of Aji Jayabaya – cloudy sky
the myriad-tinkling attacks – in its deeps a poem maiden craves
shuffle of waves' leaves – draw close – tender eyes
warbling drawl of bluish clarinets – where the king cooled heart's beat
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
poem leaves
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 October 2009

I saw it in my mind's eye... nice nice Ahmad, Thanks For Sharing your sketchs.

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 October 2009

It's a cool dedication.

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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

wonderful poem, metaphors well embedded, lovely to read...........

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Surya . 01 October 2009

a beautiful work in very short lines. surya

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Obinna Eruchie 01 October 2009

I have to say all the 5 sketches make a beautiful picturesque especially this lyrical and adorable piece.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 October 2009

Poem written in a telegraphic style, using powerful words.

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Ruth Walters 01 October 2009

I've enjoyed all five little sketches Ahmad.... Ruthie

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Ramesh T A 01 October 2009

Sketches are nice to read! Detailed sketches are welcomed!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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