Thursday, January 29, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Paper is scattered around her room
So far she hasn't got it right
She's tried so hard
For such a long time now
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Jennifer English
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Jim French 09 February 2009

I really like this poem, I like the imagery of struggle to create and of how you can create even if it is not the medium that you originally set out to create with. I also like the pace of this poem. Jim

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Ana Zaldivar 07 February 2009

Very Very Beautiful... feel very related to it... nicely written.. like it a lot.. keep up the good work :) best wishes, ana

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