Thursday, October 1, 2009

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voiceless wishes – a pulse
there twilight smiles – must follow trace of Hercules
a true liberty – sighing lamentations – at purple pavilion
sounds like stories – kindle fire
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 05 October 2009

well expressed/....

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Chitra - 03 October 2009

a beautifuly expressed tribute!

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Kranthi Pothineni 03 October 2009

Nice expressive work.

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Louis Rams 02 October 2009

nice dedication on this poem

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Juan Carlos Abeti 02 October 2009

very poetic.great job as usual.

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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

nie poem, well expressed...10+++++++

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Kuji Soliman 02 October 2009

Lovely, but what did inspire you to write such a beautifull poem? please let me know...voted 10!

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Surya . 01 October 2009

beautifuly expressed in short lines surya

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Ravi A 01 October 2009

A nice piece from your pen. You are a good craftsman in this category of poetry.

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Obinna Eruchie 01 October 2009

Lovely poem as usual, well crafted.

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Snippets of images that hopefully bring about a resolution through a pulse where twilight smiles. love Karin

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The Lost.. 01 October 2009

nice poem to read :)

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Joseph Poewhit 01 October 2009

Has expansive dimensions

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Rajaram Ramachandran 01 October 2009

A puzzle No.1 to be solved, I find.

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the changing pace of the peace is good.. answers to questions.. wonderful

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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