A ruckus in the closet
Awakened me in the night.
Skeletons of my ancestors
Having a physical fight.
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The arena of the beginning is fantastic. I wish to quote here, let it be.. .. A ruckus in the closet Awakened me in the night. Skeletons of my ancestors Having a physical fight. This is really a beautiful poem on ancestors having stunning expression with humorous diction. Thank u dear Spock sir for wisely composed and sharing. Full vote.
A very fun poem, with good meter and rhyme. One of your very best so far, in my opinion.
Thanks, Kim. I'm glad you see the humor in it. Now if another idea would come...
Ah, Spock, very clever and well written! You made me smile! Your meter and rhymes are good and, of course, your logic, too. Well done.
Cleaned the skeletons out of my closet years ago. Told them to skedadle. I have a new wine skin. Thanks for a great poem that relates to all of us. Live long and prosper dear friend. 10