Monday, August 28, 2017

Skeletons In The Closet Comments

Rating: 4.8

A ruckus in the closet
Awakened me in the night.
Skeletons of my ancestors
Having a physical fight.
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Chris Embrick 12 February 2018

Cleaned the skeletons out of my closet years ago. Told them to skedadle. I have a new wine skin. Thanks for a great poem that relates to all of us. Live long and prosper dear friend. 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 September 2017

The arena of the beginning is fantastic. I wish to quote here, let it be.. .. A ruckus in the closet Awakened me in the night. Skeletons of my ancestors Having a physical fight. This is really a beautiful poem on ancestors having stunning expression with humorous diction. Thank u dear Spock sir for wisely composed and sharing. Full vote.

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Spock The Vegan 11 September 2017

Thank you very much. I appreciate your comment.

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Kim Barney 30 August 2017

A very fun poem, with good meter and rhyme. One of your very best so far, in my opinion.

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Spock The Vegan 30 August 2017

Thanks, Kim. I'm glad you see the humor in it. Now if another idea would come...

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Grace Jessen 29 August 2017

Ah, Spock, very clever and well written! You made me smile! Your meter and rhymes are good and, of course, your logic, too. Well done.

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Spock The Vegan 30 August 2017

Thank you Grace. I do appreciate good comments like yours.

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