Thursday, December 17, 2020

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I am a soul your body has been my home,
Pleasures and pains of a mortal dome!
While running in the space like a projectile,
I recollect my pleasures and try to smile,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 December 2020

A poem of great depth that takes us to the realm of afterlife. Liked the penultimate closure line; " I am a traveler and life was a halt at the station." A well crafted write.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2020

A POEM TO Ponder over till the skeleton leaves the lover and leaves all SOLE GR8poem sir JA 100000000000000STARS IF I CAN PASS

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 December 2020

A wonderful farewell poem sir.. extremely well crafted.5 stars.

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Varsha M 17 December 2020

A soul out there witnessing the departure it gets finally sums up journey on earth sweet and glorious in its makeup now just an air which is felt bit can't be held... beautiful sir. Great great admirations. Thank-you.

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