~ Size Zero ~ Ground Zero ~ Comments

you have an unique style of composing poem. fantastic write.

you have a unique style. Good job, keep it up.

you are an interesting poet... your work is short yet it gets you to begin thinking about how things really are...

The grand state of 'Opposite, attraction' Like trying to fuse 2 hydrogen molecules! ! lol great work as always 10

SIZE ZERO - women's way to featherweightness GROUND ZERO - terrorists' traumatic torment of twin towers.

A poetry with difference…infused with high emotive elements…especially elegy for victims of any violence furiousness A poetry of polarized ideas SZ and GZ and well dictioned… thanks for such comparative study 10++ [as prayer marks for the victims] … dr.sakti PS Thanks for info to Rediffusion Effusion

But very humane and finer distinction is sliced and reached to acme: Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers/Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears. Finely conceived 10++ PS My sincere thanks to Rediffusion Effusion for deep delving address about SZ and GZ

Sorry Niv but like Ravi A I did not get the theme after several tries and I want to give everyone who tried a 10+.

Honestly speaking I could not catch the theme in one or two readings.

Ideas and words met in a precise mathematical lines....

Very much ‘Common’ yet ‘Uncommon’…like Low / High tide of Life.. Amazing description / comparison… 10+ [For Elegy] Dr. V.

quite unique! nice job!

Any thing in world may be subject of poetry…here poet in very able way handled both the subjects …having no relation to each other…and… ‘…Sz ~ Standing ovation of cheers // Gz ~ Standing elegy of tears….’ These 2 lines make smile and weep…what a wondrous contrast poet has portrayed… Tearful 10++ for elegy…

Light and Shade of Life compared very nicely…indeed an offbeat theme…but int6o the core… Ten++ AB London

very nice and interesting comparison. thanks for sharing.

unique comparison...an interesting verses.....10

Very unusual.Haunting, lyrical last lines. Kind regards, Sandra

A sort of comparison to give a wonderful contrast.

A wonderful comparative poem

Agree with Joe…interesting contrast… Masterly imagined and jettisoned from poetic 'think-tank’