Sixty Four Compliments Honey Kiss Enjoyed Poem by me poet yeps poet

1.Love you do again and again
Kiss, kiss and kiss
till blushes your naughtiest miss...

How were the Honey's
Many so many kisses
Latest ones

Will you share it? ..........impressive lines I love these.
A beautiful poem nicely executed.''REMARKS BY SIR


2.Melodious imagery. Honey bee and Miss BEE.
" Haa mohabbat kaafi dendi ghum magar
Dekh meharbaniyaan v khoob ne,
Ashiqee Vich lutf beahumaar ne
Yaar par qurbaaniyaan v khoob ne." (Dr.Satinder Sartaaj)

2a." O, hold me for I am Donne."
" This bread I break was once the oat,
This wine upon a foreign tree
Plunged in its fruit;
Man in the day or wine at night
Laid the crops low, broke the grape's joy."

" Were oat and grape
Born of sandy all root and sap;
My wine you drink, my bread you sap."

Yes we should consider what have been given to us.
It pinches the deep corners of heart........

3.Love you do again and again/Kiss, kiss and kiss/till blushes your naughtiest miss...
brilliant romantic expression!
My pleasure revisiting this wonderful romantic poem!