Sunday, May 1, 2016

Sixteen-Syllables- Thought On Spring Night 2 Comments

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Sad
The past bad
With lots of thoughts in my head
And no one I had.
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Mike Smith 01 May 2016

Sometimes it's possible to say a lot with a little. I can relate to these 16 syllables. Reminds me of a not so long ago rough patch when loneliness was all around me no matter how many people were nearby. Good poem

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Cotter Li 01 May 2016

We have consonance.

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Fuyang, Anhui Province, China
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