Saturday, February 7, 2015

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It's summer vacation and it's thirty degrees.

A sixteen year old girl feels rejected like oil in water and despite how she tries she knows she'll always be separate from those who are wanted.
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Khairul Ahsan 23 February 2015

Many acquire traumatic experiences from peers at schools and suffer mentally. If the poem is written from personal experience, I would say it has been well expressed and the readers can see the erupting volcano. Well done!

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