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Beautiful lines for the sweet sixteen girl.. Can't imagine any older she could be the girl a lover could have been but the winds blew her too quickly and I had seen her last at sixteen! ............Very true said, it's very difficult to accept the girl who may be now old, as memory got stuck right at sixteen year old girl. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.

So sweet flowing a verse on a sweet girl of sixteen who has been blown away by sweeping winds to place her in a remote region! Somewhere she must be living with the image of a young boy of seventeen or eighteen who once stole her heart and made her ride in fancy's golden chariot! Enjoyed this lovely write!

The world may grow older but where then she was, now she must be there.......mind can't accept her in any form........nice composition