Bumble bee, let's play
Flying flower to flower
But today, don't sting
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Great lessons and intricacies of life are wonderfully depicted in these lovely haikus. Beautifully crafted.
I agree with Richard and Asim. These are all very good and each could stand on its own.. Great work!
Every single haiku stands on its own and it has a complete story in it. Bumble bees with a purpose flying over the house of cards and beginning of new chapter in life with new morning and towards the end enticing like sunset, AWESOME 5*****
Six extraordinary haikus! Absolutely magnificent! LeeAnn, just wondering why you chose to include all of them in one poem. Instead of,6 separate poems. Each one is a winner!
"But today, don't sting"