Thursday, May 5, 2022

Six Sorted Haikus Comments

Rating: 5.0

Bumble bee, let's play
Flying flower to flower
But today, don't sting
...
Read full text

LeeAnn Azzopardi
COMMENTS
Rob Lamberton 23 September 2024

"But today, don't sting"

0 0 Reply

Great lessons and intricacies of life are wonderfully depicted in these lovely haikus. Beautifully crafted.

0 0 Reply
Belle Wassermeister 06 May 2022

I agree with Richard and Asim. These are all very good and each could stand on its own.. Great work!

0 0 Reply
Dr. M. Asim Nehal 06 May 2022

Every single haiku stands on its own and it has a complete story in it. Bumble bees with a purpose flying over the house of cards and beginning of new chapter in life with new morning and towards the end enticing like sunset, AWESOME 5*****

0 0 Reply
Richard Wlodarski 05 May 2022

Six extraordinary haikus! Absolutely magnificent! LeeAnn, just wondering why you chose to include all of them in one poem. Instead of,6 separate poems. Each one is a winner!

0 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
Close
Error Success