Sunday, June 22, 2008
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Rating: ★4.3
Looking through the keyhole of an aluminum moon.
Sometimes laughing, sometimes depressed.
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Fiona Davidson
31 January 2009
So much expression in so few words Jim...excellent poem...like it...Fi...10++
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Kevin Wells
03 July 2008
So much said with such economy. And I understand exactly where you're coming from! I would probably take a page to express what you've just said in four lines! Brilliant!
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7/28/2025 6:30:50 PM # 1.0.0
Your first line is extremely original. I doubt whether anyone else could ever think this one up. Witty and wise! 10 Karin Anderson