Wednesday, June 24, 2020

Six Million Dollars For A Guitar! ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

You could feed the worlds poor,
or fight the cancer war
Slap the iron rule of tyrants
And give the back hand to fascists
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Kevin Patrick
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Mj Lemon 05 July 2020

Very profound, Kevin. Yes, you describe what we have become. Long gone are the days of any punchlines about people with so much money, they have no idea what to do with it. This verse goes to myfavourites.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2020

In total agreement with you, Kevin! Some people have so much money that could truly benefit mankind, yet spend it so foolishly. And who are those bright people who appraise these material things? How do they arrive at these ludicrous amounts? Kevin, this is a great social commentary poem. I think it would make a great song! I can hear the Bare Naked Ladies singing it right now. Great job!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2020

A thought provoking write! Admired and appreciated........10/10

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 June 2020

kurt cobain's daughter lost the fortune that he made by buying love from losers she dated. She needs maintain her lifestyle somehow. I agree with you use the money to help anyone who is in need

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