Six Gemstones: (August,2015) Comments

Thanks guys...this is an old poem that I've reworked slightly. It was composed on a poetry retreat several years ago as part of a creative writing exercise.

Wow! Brilliant poetry writing on display here Dominic. A poem to truly enthral and captivate. Your great poetry imagination has no and knows no bounds, the way a great poet should think and never be scared of any criticism, the torpedoes and all that. I wish more people on this site make the effort and time whenever possible to read an/your original and breath-taking poem.10++ and quickly added to my favourites.

Streaky blue- green miniature globe- awesome description Radiates all form of teeming life... so true. One pure white... Lost...of sadness description too mesmerizing One fiery red orange...burnish the eye of sphinx... hopeful. Too good. Admirations.