Six Enemies Poem by Chan Mongol

Six Enemies

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We can control all evil urges
We can regulate needs and minimize!
Give others more priority, advantage
Be dedicated and do some sacrifice!

To err and to do sin are human
None is ever 100 percent right;
Because, we all got urges for sex and
Illusion, greed, anger, jealousy, fight.

Where are we going so rush?
Are we totally possessed by devil?
Get that nasty out and have patience
Let's not jump for man-made ruling deal!

We got six enemies to let us suffer
Fight, jealousy, anger, greed, sex, illusion!
We are not our enemies but such are
Don't let them win their satisfaction!

Slow down and beat enemies good
They appear as control freak!
They want us to dance for them
So, disobey such, they make us sick!

Did they ever give us peace?
Rather, only addiction, causing pain!
Six foes give us a lot of cries, sufferings
Let's minimize them for our eternal gain!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 03 February 2018

Very thoughtful and moving, Chan Mongol. Indeed, why do we actively seek conflict when each one of us has 6 private companions- -each an 'enemy.'? A wonderful poem.

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