Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Six Encounters With Remarkable Creatures Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Do not be anxious about fulfillment, '
the unicorn's liquid eyes speak as eloquently
as his voice, even as he oscillates before me
between being and non-being. 'I have waited
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Kim Barney 09 February 2017

Daniel, I love this! I was doing a search for my own poem, ENCOUNTER WITH A CREATURE, when I found this, and am certainly glad that I did. Very well done, indeed.

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Baharak Barzin 20 January 2017

YES ALL WE HAVE WITNESSED IS A MASK OF GOD AND WE SHOULD NOT RESPOND WE SHOULD JUST TAKE IT

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Daniel Brick 20 January 2017

I like the confidence you express - JUST TAKE IT is an outward action but it is a sign of an inner readiness I have to focus more of my efforts on developing an underlying confidence. Thanks for identifying these themes.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 January 2017

A deeply insightful write, full of wisdom. Truly the world is full of wonders n miracles that we encounter on a daily basis but fail to see. Everything around us has something to teach, only we need to see beyond the mask. A brilliant write that deserves much more than a 10.

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Daniel Brick 20 January 2017

TO SEE BEYOND THE MASK You identified the next step after the reading/writing the poem., , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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