Six Drummers In One Apartment? Poem by Michael Gale

Six Drummers In One Apartment?



(I did this poem, in comment to the video on youtube, entitled'six drummers and an apartment'.)


A girl and five boys...
Who likes to make, such a mish-mash, of strange noise.

We each, would feel great feelings with paranoidal, if we be caught...
Did our trouble, that we brought.

What should be seeming so much dumber...
In number.

Six rhythmically filled, deep in slumber...
A band of six-a dumber, crummier, once muted, this drummer, ?

Like my poem, i do not know, what to think? ...
Is it good, or does it, - - - stink?

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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