Thursday, April 7, 2016

Sitting Under A Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun broke roughly through; flickering with the breeze
The woodpecker's busy till hunger was appeased
And leaves whose duty's done had floated gently down
Thinly covering all with a carpet of brown
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Loke Kok yee
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Simone Inez Harriman 25 April 2016

I was immersed in the nature and enjoying the images until you mentioned the chainsaws which was instantly sobering. Such a threat to our planet....10

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 April 2016

Respect to nature! Nice work.

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Spock The Vegan 07 April 2016

Great imagery and rhyming. I like the ending pointing out a problem for nature and possibly us as well. That's not Sarah Palin in the picture, is it? ...10

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Loke Kok Yee 08 April 2016

if it's not her then it must be her identical twin sister!

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Kelly Kurt 07 April 2016

I remember camping out when I was younger. I would wake up to just the lovely scene you described. Since that time, millions of acres of forest have been greedily destroyed. That is a shame and a potential disaster.

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