Sitting On The Ring Of Saturn Comments

..the silver light that the moon borrows from the sun...I love your choice of words, Great poem.

True love drenches my spirit freely. Nice!

Some times it may be fine to see someone sitting on the ring of Saturn even if not welcome otherwise.Nice thought provoking poem. Thank you.

Simply and exquisitely cosmic! I love it's flow and message! ! ! Get busy and pen more! ! Big Fan here!

shahzia, thanks dear.Yes, You the word sometimes gives us delight, sometimes pain.Yet to get the proper place in our heart......Love.

this one looks like a part of the other poem YOU, as it has the same apostrophizing touch!