Friday, September 11, 2015

Sitting On The Circus Gallery Benches, Heard I The Music, The Music Of Humanity, The Melodies Breaking And Taking Me Far Away Comments

Rating: 3.5

Sitting on the gallery benches
Heard I
The music of humanity,
The sad and solemn music of humanity
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Bijay Kant Dubey
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Jacson Gelato 12 September 2015

Vivid portrayal of childhood memory. However, the poet needs to decide whether to highlight the sad and solemn music of humanity or to let the memory of a very entertaining circus continue in the minds of those who have experienced it.

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M Asim Nehal 12 September 2015

Lovely imagery of a circus.............I liked it.......... I invite you to read my poems, Thanks.

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