Sitting On Grass Comments

A great story. I like the layout and it's stanza structure.. well done

dear hareem, i am sure this poem if written in your own language would have been a magnificent one. i dont quite get it in english. i would love to read it in your language. i love rumi and there is a touch of rumi here.

Their frisson of success Is a win ne’er to fail How love and unity Give strength to the frail! Just awesome! ! !