Sitting In An Autumn Valley Comments

A nice poem with a nice caption. Your vocabulary is splendidly rich. 'He swallowed me, heart and soul' - this line says more than the words can mean. 'His promises warmed me to my quim And filled my passion above the brim' - nice! Loved the description. Thanks to poetess Valsa George for bringing out the summary of the poem so nicely in her comment.

Wow that was like a box full of candy bars! keep it up Write, share! peace

the moss must have worked quickly OR 'you' pondered for a LONG TIME, in order for the moss to finish covering the walls! ok, ok i just read the Poet's Notes, so i 'know' it is not about you. ;) - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - yeah. bane..........i looked it up. some word from your sci-fi, horror stories no doubt. noun \ˈbān Definition of bane 1 a obsolete: killer, slayer b: poison c: death, destruction [stop the way of those that seek my bane — Philip Sidney] d: woe 2 : a source of harm or ruin: curse [national frontiers have been more of a bane than a boon for mankind — D. C. Thomson] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - quim! i think i know that. nice! there used to be a TV series about a beautiful 'frontier doctor': Dr. Quinn, i believe. it just made me think of HER! enceinte............i'll guess at this one. sounds Spanish to me. Now regreting his lies all my days ....regreting didn't look right. i am now regretting having to show you: Full Definition of regret regretted regretting transitive verb 1 a: to mourn the loss or death of b: to miss very much 2 : to be very sorry for [regrets his mistakes] intransitive verb : to experience regret regretter noun ======================================= i wonder how old you were when you wrote this. and now, still young, you DO have a nursling, whatever that is. bri :) but you are NOT single, as they say. :) :)

A very interesting write. The rhyming is very good. A blending of natural phenomena in the physical sense and the nature of human emotions. A sad tale of abandonment extremely well written.

first lesson from nature- when emotion overrules wisdom lost - a genuine situation beautifully depicted

Sitting beside a brook in a valley in the autumn, memories fly back to a time in summer when a girl got duped by a handsome guy! Their love had all the thrill and charm of a vigorous romance until things took a drastic turn when he learned that she was carrying his child in her womb! This probable story is given a realistic touch with the first person narration! It shakes the heart and takes us to the emotional turbulence of a would be single mother! A beautiful and poignant write Darlene!