Sitting By The Lake On A Lovely Evening Comments

just what I was looking for... melancholy! ! ! there is such a solace in lonliness..... there is nothing like feeling warmth of mother nature I love romantic poems! ! ! ! ! great job! ! ! last verse has H.L.V Derozio effect! ! ! gr8! !

I loved your ending verses....very heart warming poem...so heartfelt one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The imagery was great.......10

As I was reading a line after a line, I realized that each lines of yours is perfectly written. Very well done, my friend! 'But my butterfly heart navigates in the space between those warm water drops untouched...so lonely... thinking of you...just you.' So true, so real! ! Keep up your good work... K.Poornima

wow, lovely personification here. dreamy poem. i like it a lot.

sitting by the lake on a lovely evening penning an equally lovely delicate poem of love...

A lovely evening indeed, then going to the one you love - very romantic write

This is a truly beautiful poem. The images you create in the first three stanzas blew me away! The last stanza says it all.....so aptly, so very sensitively, so lovingly. Top marks! Karin Anderson

good...good....nicely written

i like this one.. nice interpretation and expression of your thoughts and observations. take care