Wednesday, November 16, 2005

Sit Down To Dance Comments

Rating: 4.5

Temptation was going to get me
When ego ruled my head
Ignoring the common sense voices
I blindly went ahead
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Bill Smith
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Shannon Chapel 04 December 2005

This one made me cry, too, Bill. Didn't I tell you to knock it off! lol Lovely. S

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Mary Nagy 16 November 2005

Wow! This is so sad yet so beautiful Bill. Great poem. (You're better off without her anyway.......if a woman would cheat on her 'current', she would do the same to you) . That's just my opinion. This was very romantic and passionate and forbidden all rolled up into one! Very good poem. sincerely, Mary

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Ernestine Northover 16 November 2005

What a really beautiful poem Bill, it flowed marvellously, and I couldn't stop reading until I got to the end, It held me fast. Brilliant. Sincerely Ernestine.

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