Sisters Abyss....896 Comments
HER veins were full of rust and
corrosion, her eyes held pictures
of the past, black and white.
HER body capsized in a tub full
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reading this makes my toes go all tingly and i want to hurry from the bath with my rubber ducky Warm regards allan
Hi David, don't 'say' Brave and Strong.' Show' it with images in the verses. You have a good workable image here- 'In a tub full of sharks'..
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8/26/2025 10:36:44 AM # 1.0.0
David, the emotion in this jumps off the page...