Friday, January 16, 2009

Sister Sister Comments

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Sister Sister
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Sierra Breeland
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Chinedu Dike 24 June 2015

The diction of the piece is simple, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard Snyder 24 June 2015

You did a great job Sierra. Keep writing. I won't be surprise if your is mentioned amongst the greatest one day. Congrats!

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John Richter 24 June 2015

Michael Joseph, you are a cad. Please adhere to your mother's rule stating that if you have nothing nice to say then say nothing at all. Or was your mother's voice limited to the howling of a jackal? Because that is what your comment appears to be. Everyone else who comes here, will you please hit the dislike button on Michael's comment and hit the like button on all the positive comments here? Please? This seven year old poet rhymed every one of her couplets.... Oh the insensitive nature of some people just appalls me.

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Gauri Vyas 24 June 2015

really nice and i think you have great sense of writing.keep writing!

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Michael Joseph 24 June 2015

This is the poem of the day? ? ? Really? ! ! How are these chosen? I thought this was a serious poem site Isn't being at least 18 a prerequisite? C'mon PH!

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Soulful Heart 14 October 2014

so your sister is a tease.....well sisters are a tease because they test your love and teach you that love can be mysterious...that makes you love somebody from whom you even wanna escape but cannot live away for long as well...............true and simple

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Melvin Banggollay 18 January 2009

Little sister this is a great masterprice keep writing my dear fellow thanks and take care, melvin

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MES PLGB 17 January 2009

Wow! Amazing write! Love it! Go Girl! Keep writing! and keep me updated on any new poems u have! : P

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Great Job Sierra You have great talent! ! ! It's good to be the big sister me and your dad are great siblings. And now you get to be a Big sister and show her the ropes just like your dad showed me! ! He taught me how to ride a bike. Keep being a great sister and I love you both so much. Kiss Kiss Auntie April

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 January 2009

Sisterly writes full of love.Yeahh the little teaser is growin up.sweet piece Sierra.

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Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

Nothing else like a big sister to teach

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Yes i agree with you Sierra the little brat savanna is still very cute.. She needs to learn a lot and I am happy you can help her with that you are such a great big sister savanna and you are wonderful i love you both so much.. Krista

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you're right sierra savanna can be a mess... Cute poem Uncle danny

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Ying Escalona 16 January 2009

wow..great sister.i admire you so much darling...

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