Monday, October 25, 2010

Sister And Brother... Comments

Rating: 4.5

Imagine a world where all is calm and peacful,
Where our fellow man is not deceatful.
Dream of a life that's bathed in peace and love,
Where we strive to be better when push comes to shove.
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Ian Bowen 26 October 2010

Your poem needs a spell check.

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Cody Passey 25 October 2010

Very good, a poem that sends a good message about society today. I like it. We should trade comments...

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