Monday, May 12, 2014

Sister Comments

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Who comes next your Mother?
Who comes next your father?
Who is the one,
You share secrets with?
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Fatima Obaid
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Roseann Shawiak 14 August 2015

Total truth and honesty of what a sister is truly like! I have six sisters, I love this perfect poem! It could be a tribute to any one or all of them! Thank you for sharing this sisterly poem! Love it! RoseAnn

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Khalida Bano Ali 09 August 2014

Relationship of a brother and sister is sometimes greater than relationship with the mother. A lovely poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2014

Ah wow a lovely poem to sisterly affections. So nice to read u again.

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Saadat Tahir 05 June 2014

its heartening to see this tribute to a lovely relationship we all learn as we go... keep going stay blessed

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Payal Parande 24 May 2014

oh how fascinating piece, wonderfully written and so sweet, i too love my sister the most.. bravo

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Shahzia Batool 14 May 2014

Cheetii must be very happy Fatima, it's a great tribute to her...to be honest with you, the tribute poems are not to be judged by any poetry yard stick or the tools of the trade but by feelings they carry...the way you have addressed her and the way you have carried this subject is all but wonderful...im grateful to you for sharing it with me...stay good!

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Yash Shinde 12 May 2014

A cute tribute to thine beloved sister. She is indeed a gift from the almighty, and a blessing for us mortals.....

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