Siskin, A Sinister Comments

Powerful write! Indeed Pain truthfully flying with heavy wings, with each flap one tear made of blood... I can feel flipping and crashing hearts, my fingers hardly type..

poignant to its best. The pain brings out the bitter truth. Thumbs up, for the lines are awesome

Life isn't always a bowl of cherries the dark side of life is the path we do not tread, thought provoking poem...regards

A good thought provoking poem, .....good flow of words

poignant in all dimensions/deserve the best! ! !

Great poem, heartfelt and emotive write.

Swetha, this is great poem, reading it I found myself in the pages of history, feeling the touch of darkness and pain, finding oneself on the arms of just must knowing its is not what is mean to be. An incredible write. I love it

pain, rebellion, helplessness set the tone of this poem... there's no exaggeration in the scene portrayed. a social issue of relevance dealt deftly!

Wow that was good; you really made me think. Please keep writing! !

A very strong subtle poem! Well done.Thank you

It was darker ink and shadowed images used to appear in this poem...It makes me thing about hard life, real one and the other side in different rights. The rhetoric question left there make a good conclusion to fit readers mind.what they feel and what they think...it is a good poem, u reveal all out..keep it up :) write more and thanks for inviting Swetha_Unwritten Soul

You depicted the tragedy of our society.Very true.Great work Swetha!