Siren Went Off Comments

Great poem! I really liked it.... though a bit long! Still you have traced the entire course of the tornado and the fever, horror and excitement it stirs in human hearts! 10

where and what nature's wreath will bring.... wreath? or wrath? ? :) I was all alert now ............no wonder! ! ! ! in to grey funnel............. i would use into, but i have noticed at least two other PH poets, whom i admire, [both infuenced by british english; one is British, another Indian] usin similar pairs of words where i would combine the pair into single word. i'm really liking this poem. A moving messenger of death and destruction Yet creating a thrill for storm chasers ............ in two consecutive lines you have expressed how different people can have vastly different views of things. i like the double alliteration in the first of the lines. the fear, the thrill, the anticipation All building and subsiding faster than I could think........ great reporting! i don'r recall ever seeing a funnel cloud, though i would find it thrilling i think. Such is the human resilience. .............yes, life goes on.............for some...........though not always well. survival of the fittest? ? a great poem, great reporting. thank you. i hope you are always so lucky! i'm sure some who prayed were hit hard and wonder why? to MyPoemList! bri :)

an amazing details of the ad-venting tornado... a very engrossing reading.. love it...10