Sir Raymond Of The Castle Comments

Nicely penned poem. Thanks poet and congrats.

From her fond mother's doating eyes The radiant gem he bore; The weeping maids and village swains Beheld her charms no more. Congrats and thanks to the departed soul for the poet of the day AWARD.

Such a very nice poem.....

For shame, shake off those woman's tears, The frowning bridegroom cried, And know, SIR RAYMOND'S warlike breast Disdains a timid bride. Sheer beauty of a lyrical poem cast in the mould of a classic ballad enchants the reader. Thanks a lot.

A gallant boy! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.