Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Sir Lorin Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first time we saw each other face to face
You asked for a hug and in your arms I found my place
Just in the first 10 minutes of being together with you
I knew that you were special, rare and one of the few
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Deborah Cromer
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Kelly Seale 09 August 2012

This sounds like something special, so special that it stays with you forever. Beautiful Write Deborah! (see The Fountain) in my writes. -Kelly.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 August 2012

oh what a write of love of passion breath when flecks to fire wind, simply beautiful write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2012

A beautiful love confession that clearly shows your Beauty and Talent! It is well crafted and poignant! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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