Sipping The Potion Poem by Aqua Flower

Sipping The Potion

Rating: 4.5


I'm waking up
sipping the potion
will it perk me up
turn this around
Oh don't let me drown
in this sorrow and pain
sipping the potion
is it in vain

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Friday, June 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,morning,wake up
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A good cup of coffee can perk someone up for the day.Thank goodness they haven't found anything wrong with having coffee in the morning.:)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 24 November 2020

Sailing On A Sea To Sunset Paradise a course must be set charted to an island of rest we must sail a ship into the sunset red promise of better days to wake in a tropical paradise of new surroundings beautiful warm warm hot flower scented exquisite possibilities Inspired by the poem 'Sipping The Potion' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 24 November 2020

Drowning In A Sea Of Sorrow sadly sipping a little potion often has little no effect when we are drowning in a sea of sorrow emotion waking into an ocean of intense pain can drive near insane a little potion can never long cure tsunami depth surging emotion a drop of peace sought intense is lost in vast sorrow pain emotion Inspired by the poem 'Sipping The Potion' by the poet Aqua Flower. Dedicated to the poet Aqua Flower.

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

a course must be set charted to an island of rest, we must sail a ship into the sunset red promise of better days, to wake in a tropical paradise of new surroundings, beautiful warm warm hot flower scented exquisite possibilities

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Terry Craddock 07 November 2020

sadly sipping a little potion often has little effect, when we are drowning in a sea of sorrow emotion, waking into an ocean of intense pain can drive near insane, a little potion can never long cure tsunami depth surging emotion, a drop of peace sought intense is lost in vast sorrow pain emotion,

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Aqua Flower 26 November 2020

Yes sipping the potion only keeps you a float for so long before you drown in a sorry of pain like a tsunami indeed. Visualizing sunsets and sunrises in better days is a better way. Thank you for your comment! :)

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