Thursday, July 11, 2013

Sip Of Wine! Comments

Rating: 3.3

Each sip of wine
Touch my heart with
tides of love
Keep on hitting me high and low
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Akhtar Jawad 08 August 2018

Life is asip of wine that makes us ecstatic for sometime and when we come in our senses we wish another sip to fulfill our broken dreams.

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Jesse Ellsbury 12 July 2013

I really like this one. The repetition and parallelism are very effective, and I love the dark turn at the end. Great mix of positive and negative emotion, like a nice and well balanced glass of vino.

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David Wood 12 July 2013

A sip of wine is best savoured cold but love should be warm and tender.

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Otteri Selvakumar 11 July 2013

sip of wine a nice poem Geetha

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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