Thursday, January 26, 2017

Sip Life In Expansive Moonlit Rivers Of Flowing Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

in expansive star darkest velt rivers of flowing night
set amongst sparkling twinkling glittering stars shines
a crescent crystal teardrop falling on an earth star stone
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Terence George Craddock
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Mj Lemon 31 January 2017

Absolutely brilliant. This one I shall have to keep revisiting. There's something here that reminds me of Coleridge's Kublai Khan.

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Terry Craddock 01 February 2017

Coleridge's Kublai Khan is one of my favourite poems written from an opium dream, but I think when writing many good poets are dreaming, the muse captures the moment time transforming us to other places, I find it a buzz a natural high.

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