Sip Life In Expansive Moonlit Rivers Of Flowing Night Poem by Terence George Craddock

Sip Life In Expansive Moonlit Rivers Of Flowing Night

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in expansive star darkest velt rivers of flowing night
set amongst sparkling twinkling glittering stars shines
a crescent crystal teardrop falling on an earth star stone

inaccessible magic moonlight rules tides shaping river night
poets hunt moonlight words to personify mortal votive lives
poet sacrifices own sacred heart beating in moon blood tears

the poet is a leaf lonely shade falling into deep flowing river night
carried upon crystal teardrop breath moonbeam ephemeral currents
like a stone the poet sinks into high mountain sacred word mysteries

Copyright © Terence George Craddock

Thursday, January 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,nature,nature love,night,poetry,poets,rivers,stars
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem 'The Moon, The Poet' by the poet Cigeng Zhang.
Dedicated to the poet Cigeng Zhang.
Original version of the split images 'A Crescent Crystal Teardrop Falling On An Earth Star Stone', 'Moonlight Rules Tides Shaping River Night' and 'A Leaf Lonely Shade Falling Into Deep Flowing River Night' by the poet Terence George Craddock.
Written in January 2017 on the 27.1.2017.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mj Lemon 31 January 2017

Absolutely brilliant. This one I shall have to keep revisiting. There's something here that reminds me of Coleridge's Kublai Khan.

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Terry Craddock 01 February 2017

Coleridge's Kublai Khan is one of my favourite poems written from an opium dream, but I think when writing many good poets are dreaming, the muse captures the moment time transforming us to other places, I find it a buzz a natural high.

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