Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Sinners And Losers Comments

Rating: 5.0

A thousand times you'd smile
Saying you were leaving me
That you've found something better
And that you want to be free
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COMMENTS
Ellias Anderson Jr. 13 August 2012

Jon, words are playing with each other in this poem, it's a nice art work. You really spread your feelings in the best way with a nice word choosing. The reader can feel the exact condition while he or she is reading this art..! ! ! Well done Dude!

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