Monday, July 7, 2014

Sinner Comments

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Serpentine corpuscles trickle to his chin
as they batter him in incensed anger's blow
but couldn't they break the broken man within
the sinner long used to seeing own blood's flow!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Lorraine Colon 07 July 2014

Well done, Pradip. I could feel this poor man's pain because of your eloquence.

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