Sinless Comments

I was happy being ignorant. But you all wanted me to rise, To step out and face the world. And when I coloured myself in its shades You consider me raw, you put blames. it is the way of the world. it is true what you write. tony

really a write deep from once heart! ! ! ! ! most people wish to do go the way what their body will ask to rather than faith and truth..................but it would be really adventureous if we can go the less travelled as said by frost............admire...10plus

thought provoking and very beautiful thoughts expressed

great poem.. very true, easier said than done..

wow! am so amazed, thank you very much for sharing this write, if time permitts for you, can you please inbox me the story behind these wonderful words The_African_Son

It is indeed a wonderful poem.. Just wanna say world may blame only till you care for what they say... And well only a great person can frame such a wonderful poem.. Consider yourself the best.. Everyone will consider you someday.

And when I coloured myself in its shades You consider me raw, you put blames. Man is born free but everywhere in chains. The poem is wonderful. It is the poem of a conscious mind. The phases of life are developed intelligently. I like the thoughts behind the poem. A true message with arguments equally true. The ending tells all the reasons for the construction of the poem. How I wish to relive those moments, Moments when I was unaware. Days when I was called innocent Days of unreality Days when fairies existed Days when I was a child Days when I was SINLESS.....