Sinking Paper Boat Comments

Nice poem.Thanks dear poet for sharing.10+I invite you to read and comment on my poem The wooden boat.Thanks.

Beautiful emotion expressed through your mighty pen. Well done. Keep writing. Invite you to read Paper boat. Thanks for sharing. Stay blessed.

We see. we think, and as much we think we become more and more sad. How helpless we are, a toy in the hands of our fates.

we have lot more to adore and feel with attempts to fill

until it sinks in depth of holy fire you are becoming a mystic. All real poets are mystics. you are one. liked your poem very much. tony

Though very harsh but this is the bare truth of our life with which we have to move on. Thanks for speaking a truth.

STRONG EXPRESSION FROM SHORT LINES, MAY YOU AGONIES SINK, MAY YOUR COMFORTS RISE

Eternal truth cannot be changed indeed!

Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. An intensive poem shared. Thank you dear Anita, keep the ball rolling.....10

Awesome poem with nice picture.............10+++

Sailing in half sunk Inverse boat Other half is filled With muse. Beautiful imagery. While sailing in half sunk boat, deriving courage and inspiration to fight back from the muse is definitely laudable. Insightful poem. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful poem, Anita. May all your sorrows sink