Thursday, August 9, 2007

Sinking Comments

Rating: ★5.0

The ground melts below me, making me sink
The ground covers my face, making me choke
The last bit of air I have, gets wasted
It seeps out of my nose and mouth creating an air bubble
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Tobias Gray
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Brenda Arroyo 19 October 2009

Aside from straight to the point, this is bleak, cold even. My favorite line: 'Darkness sweeps over me canceling my fear'

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Anabel just Anabel 08 October 2009

wow! me likes it! ! : D

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Sherri Coulter 01 October 2009

mmmmmmmmmm a grizzly death...but yet, we live! ? love it 10

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Tobias Gray

Tobias Gray

Honou, Germany
Tobias Gray
Tobias Gray
Honou, Germany
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