Wednesday, June 3, 2009
Sinking Comments
Rating: ★5.0
The flow of blood is bumming like a font of wound beneath,
taking my pain away untill there's no more grief to keep,
I'm drowning in this bottomless sea of feelings collapsed into parts,
I'm sinking in a shade of blotched red but yet covers my head into dark,
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7/20/2025 12:55:05 PM # 1.0.0
Sinking.... In the deep sorrows of life, Sinking.... In this grieved soul of mine, Sinking.... Untill I feel the seeking time, Sinking.... Untill I feel It's the moment to die, Sinking.... Untill the nails scratch my skin, Sinking.... Untill there's no more remorse for sin, But I know I'll remain sinking.... 'till life shall release my soul from within..... wow very sweetly written verses of your rich poem.. perfect.. you are advancing as a perfect poet if you do continue writing.. pray for your more success.. this is a great poem indeed 10 ++++++++++++++++