Wednesday, July 31, 2019

Sinkhole Comments

Rating: 4.5

It was a place with beauty to behold.
But in the midst of the beauty laid a sinkhole.
It was like walking in a beautiful inner city park.
But getting clubbed in the head after dark.
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Lamar Cole
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Douglas Scotney 31 July 2019

thanks for the warning...and the reminder that I'm yet to use 'club' in a poem...let alone 'clubbed'....'sinkhole' too!

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A B Faniki 31 July 2019

A delightful piece. I really enjoy reading it. Keep them coming

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