Tuesday, December 13, 2005

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Rating: 4.5

Poised and intent, you willingly listen
so deep, full of life
so unshallow
with an active and vast heart
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Solomon Brook 14 December 2005

Thanks. Good point out, I corrected that. Your review is greatly appreciated. Looking forward to yours.

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Declan McHenry 14 December 2005

It's a good analogy and takes a second read. I have a problem with 'prowess(ness?) ' but that, in itself, does not take away from a thoughful piece.

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