Monday, June 23, 2008

~sink Or Swim~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

For every light and shadow shone
from every joy and pain that's known,
Arise and sets like sun and moon
forgive, forget, relive.....how soon?
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Marvin Brato 23 June 2008

Nice write, you portrayed life as vast ocean with horrendous waves and killing tides! Well, it is for most people, yet the human soul can swim for hope and salvation! A 10.

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